Btw I mean no offense to anyone)

Here's the intro
https://scratch.mit.edu/studios/4195226

The voice was deep but strangely....hopeful,I slowly opened my eyes to see the man I hated most,the one who was never in my life,never a part of me.....my father,he cried tears of joy seeing me open my eyes,I quickly sat up but winced in pain as I clutched my stomach "you broke a few ribs,it's not good for you to sit up" the doctor looked at me as she said that,I avoided eye contact with my father,he spoke to me "I'm sorry I was never there for you,I'm sorry I couldn't be a father" he reached out to my but I slapped his hand away "YOU WERE NEVER MY FATHER!YOU WERE NEVER THERE FOR ME!!WHY DO YOU COME NOW?!"I yelled,it hurt so much,physically and mentally,I hated him,the next month I was out of the hospital fully healed,I went back to school,everyone knew what happened,they all hated that boy,some would give me presents or cards or ask me if I'm ok,the popular kids asked me to replace the boy in their group,i did,I figured being popular would protect me,hide the truth,keep my mind off of everything...but it made things worse,more people liked me,I had no time for myself,everyone bothered me about the "accident" till one day someone entered my life,someone that will always have a special place in my heart,she's always there for me no matter what,better than any other friend,she comforted me,makes me feel at ease,she was my shield to everything,my own little gaurd,then one day she got a boyfriend,we drifted apart farther and farther everyday like a stranded boat on the ocean,we stopped talking,we only occasionally said hi as we passed each other,until she never noticed me at all

(Imma stop here! Let me know for a part two!)