So I'm sending an email to the girl's volleyball coach of my school right now and I need to know if it sounds good. TuT
Would you let me join as the manager if you were the coach?
"Dear Ms. REDACTED
I'm interested in becoming KD's girls volleyball team's manager. I'm a Junior this year and was hoping to start when this year's tryouts are starting. I don't have much experience with this kind of thing, but I've watched some of the girl's games and think I could help them become more of a family instead of just teammates. I would love to be able to have this opportunity to help out the team and bring them together.
Sincerely, Abigail REDACTED."